Rockwolf66

Corrina gives Nick a quick pat down and grabs Nick's gun tag. She hands it to the doorman.

"I think you may want the police to take a look at his gear. I don't think that he has the propper permits for them."

OOC: Corrina Just gave Nick about twenty years for illegal firearms. Of course thats Modern gun laws.

"Just drop him." Corrie states." By the time he gets out, well he will have been stripped of quite a bit of metal and you can throw a getting out party for him. Priorities, Get clear first. THEN we take care of buisiness."

What she says makes sense, Take care of blackburn first. Nick can wait.

Corrina gives Hector a look that says Nick is now going to be in Wayne Grow's shoes but he is not getting away.

"Will do sir." she says holding her breifcase in the hand of her injured arm. with difficulty she gets the boss into sitting position. looking around she yells."I could use a hand over here please!"

Looking over at the EMP'ed cyberpsycho Nick, Corrina mentally debates bringing him along with them. Looking at Hector she asks " can you move?"

She then goes to get her breifcase and then Help the boss.

ok as some of you don't know the stories that I am talking about here are the links.

Chrimson & Chrome

Blacktip

Love and a .50 cal

ok what should I improve on?

Note Equipment and some of the character descriptions are going to change a bit but how should I change them.

Roll: 7

Given that Nick she needs Nick the Psycho off of her she slashes the arm that is holding her just above the elbow(going for the tendon that would alow him to pull her closer.) then she will drive her foot into the side of his body, slightly under his last rib. ( doing such will affect a person in a similar way to a kidney punch, as the force of impact will hit the kidneys.)

OOC: Brushing up on my Pressure points used in combat. I don't want Nick dead yet.

Hello everyone,

I have desided to re-write my old works that have been posted here on forum. I am doing this as my skills as a writer have dramatically improved and some of my old stuff just seems rather lame and 2-D. I would like to know what I am doing right and what I need refinement in. the Help of everyone on forum who has read my work( with the exception of one god damned troll who will be sodded if i ever meet them in person.). I want to put out some good coherant stories for everyone and would like input.

Thanks all

Rockwolf66

As Corrina has gotten control of this psycho it is time to put him down. Useing the calused knife edge of her now free arm she hits the point where the neck meets the shoulder. not hard enough to really hurt him just enough to knock him out cold. If the first blow does not do it she will repeat untill he is down.

ROLL: 3

Ok as Nick is a borderline cyberpsycho Corrie goes for an edge. out comes the flash knife to destroy any Facial muscle Nick still has and to take out an eye if he will not let go. She has gone beyond restraint and is trying to cripple him, not kill him yet.( latter if she gets the chance.)

ROLL=9

ok as it seems that Nick is playing rather dirty first off is the cupped plam of her free hand to his nearest ear then she will try to grab his bottom lip and free her arm from his mouth( by doing her best to ripp his face off with her bare hands). next comes several knees to the floating ribs she is trying to break them.

Roll( For pain)= 5

Roll for attack= 2

need any other rolls?

ROLL=7

ok Nick wants to play nasty, well Corrie knows some really bad things and would love to show the mother once she gets her parton out of here. As Nick is playing nasty Corrie knees him in a kidney then shifts her grip and snugs the front of Nicks neck into the inside of her right elbow and with her right hand gripping her left bicep. puts her left hand on the back of nicks head. Pushing with her left hand while flexing her right arm, nick will eather pass out from the constricted blood flow to his little brain or he will fight and break his psycho neck.

OOC: ok, let me refrase that. "if"Nick tries to attack Blackburn Corrie will slide into his path do her best Ippon Seoinage (one armed shoulder throw*). and follow nick down into a form of Hadaka Jime(Naked Strangle/ sleeper hold), and do her best not to accidently break Nick's neck( as has happened several times to the LAPD).

* ot from My Judo Textbook

OOC: around the table.

ROLL=3

(I hope your tables are like code books Joe, use once then burn.)

Corrie will slip between Nick and her sponsor and then nutralize Nick in one of the least harmful way she knows Ippon Seoinage (one armed shoulder throw*). followed by dropping down and appling a Hadaka Jime(Naked Strangle/ sleeper hold). once Nick is no longer attacking she will Help the sponsor out.

*= Can give description if you need it.

Corries first action is to scan quickly for other threats. second is to unplug her patron as he needs to get clear now. yes that will probably piss him off but he is boss and Her Sensei told her to allways try to protect her client and insulate them from the wetwork if at all possible. in this case keep him clear of the rumble that is happening.

OOC: all but one of those enhancements are purely cosmetic and the one that isn't can be replaced with Nymph Perfume.

" well this jeune-fille, has seen the elephant, and if you want to try to spank me pick the Dojo for after we get this job done." Corrina states rather calmly." what would you sugest that we go and find after I find myself a lolly-pop."

OOC: well given that she has indicated about people touching her with her actions, it's a safe bet that she's not looking for a licensed prostitute.

Corrina gives Sylvaine a raised eyebrow. "I am not very good with formal wear. as for enhancements I was thinking a combination of a Bodycure treatment, autotanner and some tailored pherimones. I do believe that it would make for a destracting combination don't you agree?"

You can note that she does not mention Sylvaine's age, or the fact that she is not the type to be seen with Hector as Corrina looks German with all caps. Nick she just seems more apropriate with. " then again if we both wear something low cut and European we can get most of the attention off of the men." She says with a grin."If you are up to it in your old age"

Corrina lets out a small feminine chuckle.

Corrina scoots up to hector and asks" Could I see that invataion after you. I Think that we all should maybe go as couples as you and Sylvaine are about the same age and well given my lack of B&E skills I think that Nick and Myself would make a better diversion and interferance to whatever the pair of you are trying to pull off."

She looks towards Sylvaine "Do you think that you could help Nick and myself picksomething apropriate out. I was thinking about haveing Nick in a decent suit and proper tie. while I would go in a slightly immodest blue number combined with a few enhancements on my natural looks." at the mention of enhancements she starts to grin.

OOC: sorry.

ok Corrina tells the rest of the group the plan that comes to mind when takeing into account the various physical and mental ages of the team and asks for revisions on her little plan.

ooc: well Corrina is a killer but the difference between her and Nick is that she is alot more selective about who she destroys.

OOC: how old is Nick as I am trying to plan something. as Makeing said couples similar in ages would make then slightly more belivable and honestly I am thinking along the lines of a shell game. one couple tryes to attract mild attention(thinking Corrina in something reveling yet modest.) and the other couple works on aquiering needed information. will work ot the details latter.

WTF Tark,

you mean that their is such a website?

damn, some people have issues, like a friends band that has it's page on XXX. yourmomsawhore.XXX.

Personally I wonder if this should be a Cosplay related link. Spotpoe