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Akira
in Network 54
Hm, for an anime marathon we'd have to decide upon some good series to watch... Preferably a few I haven't seen yet...
Suggestions: Gasaraki, Ehrgeiz, The Irresponsible Captain Tylor... that should keep us busy for the weekend.
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you should have seen their faces when i explained they were detained to bed by the doctor, and what a catheter is. *looks nastily blank*
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someone once said it depends on the combat... but that might be the rule for D&D... say for example you are battling a rat and you're high level... the outcome is certain so you may as well just let them win. on the other hand, if it's mortal kombat let the dice tell, because it makes the outcome uncertain..
i killed off two PC's today... they were clumsy enough to get locked in a storage room on the lower levels of a sinking ship... sometimes i wish they could be wise enough not to try to intimidate the captain whose boat they're trespassing on while on the middle of the ocean.
hadn't they been clumsy i hadn't been forced to kill them... anyway, i made a LUCK roll and they failed utterly. I rolled the dice again and let them survive because they looked to sad and it's the first time they're roleplaying outside of computers both of them so they're bound to make awful mistakes... they did have to recover hospitalised though.
tell me, am I too nice?
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the thing about all kinds of intimate interaction with people is that it makes you want to hang yourself
i can't understand what's wrong with the morally depraved world we live in where people seem to no longer have any form of decency in their bones. me, i'm decent, me, i'm utterly revolted by the thought of skin against skin. i don't touch people's hands, unless i like them a lot.
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isn't it unlikely that they got around to creating a new park out of an area where they ahd previously dropped napalm?
but then again, wouldn't there be anything better to drop on the area rather than napalm by the time we are speaking of?
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I'm trying to find this really good thing that Neil Gaiman once wrote as advice for authors. it made a major impact on me... However, I'm having trouble finding it..
It's not because I thought of it specifically by reading your story, but generally because people often make the mistake not to heed the thing so it's always good advice. It went something like.
ah wait... got it.
QUOTE Hi Neil! Like so many others, I'm an aspiring author who wants to ask your advice on some detail of the craft. This particular questionable detail is about adverbs and dialogue.
Various 'guides to good writing' have told me to avoid adverbs, calling them 'weak' and so forth. And especially to try and avoid the egregious Tom Swifties. And I've also been told not to fear using a simple "said" rather than resorting to more obscure terms like "implied", "gasped", "insinuated", and the all-time winner(?), "ejaculated". But I find that this combination of suggestions either leads to a long string of boring dialogue where the most exciting thing I can think to do is move the words "(s)he said" from the beginning to the middle to the end of the sentence, or alternately to me doing what I've been told not to in order to make things more lively (the more frequent outcome).
I plan to pay attention to this sort of thing in the next few stories and books I read, but the fact that I've never really noticed how good authors handle it leads me to believe it must be one of those subtle tricks that one only spots when it fails. So I was wondering if you had any words of advice as to how one can convey nuances of emotion or intonation in dialogue without either resorting to excessive adverbs or those alternatives to "said". (If you don't, I think I'll just go on using adverbs. They're in the language for a reason, after all.)
Thanks!
Curtana
"Said's" are invisible. They vanish onto the page. The eye barely sees them -- they become one with the inverted commas that indicate that something is being said. They're the arrows on the speech balloons that show you who's saying what. Lots of authors, when they start out, remember from school that you shouldn't repeat words too much, and are careful to replace each "said" with "growled" "uttered" "yelped' "hissed" "exclaimed" "asseverated" "muttered" "affirmed" and so on, and cannot work out why people dismiss the writing as amateurish. Use them, but use them sparingly. It's like salt in a dish. Too much and it's all you taste.
I don't think there's anything wrong with adverbs (he asseverated, gnomishly) but I do tend to do a final read-through of anything I've written, deciding whether each adverb lives or dies, based really on whether it adds anything. If it's implicit in what I've already said in the book I chuck it out, bravely .
Can you tell people that the film Sex, Lies and Superheroes is screening in Boston on Saturday Dec 20th? Details at http://www.weeklydig.com/dig/content/5398.aspx
Certainly.taken from http://www.neilgaiman.com/journal/2003_12_14_archive.asp
which contains many more fun and good facts about Neil Gaiman. This was just really good piece of advice for everyone aspiring to write
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Hm, but if Cyberpunk 2020 is set in an overpopulated world, aren't New York style cities bound to be more common? So in that respect, just lots of skyscrapes and that.
Which brings into mind city complexes: large buildings underneath which lie cities, or inside, or what you're saying...
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so: a) be picturesque
b ) plan really well and prepare
c) make sure you done all of the above
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What about pornography/paedophilia? You have as yet failed to bring up this topic, as I see it.
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Ah, fopr dungeons and dragons I used to do entire cities with living blocks and that. In theory, I could have been a good DM, but was nervous ^^;; Tie Athan is my masterpiece *brags*
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Akira
in Network 54
The gang-wars = good
Incoherence as far as plotline goes = bad
Esacflowne the movie is better than Akira. Basically, very many anime films are better than Akira (Laputa, Hotaku no Haka, End of Evangelion/Death and Rebirth).
And everybody: See Cybercity OEDO 808, if for nothing else then for the wonderfully 80'sish display in music and voice features.
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what scale is the map drawn in?
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I can't help but wondering; all these people (dana and Spudfairy) whose names have been mentioned, they're all old bad guys, ne?
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Akira
in Network 54
Anyone who's got an objective opinion about whether the 2001 version was better than the old one? I've only seen the old one.
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I think I'd rather not be.
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The worst things with guide lines are that they aren't actual prohibitions of things. And you know that it's up to you whether you are going to make an effort out of it or not, butpeople will eb seriously disappointed if you don't. THen you identify a specific occasion where you know you broke the rules real bad, and it eats you from the inside >.< *has slightly neurotic tendencies*
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Akira
in Network 54
*peers slightly*
The movie has a lot better ending than the manga has. At least in my opinion. Though the movie has too little of the original plot in it. It would have been better as a series where more of the actual happenings could be included.
And yes, I just suddenly felt like dragging up a post from the past. It seemed romantic in a way.
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let's retard:
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Press attention and money are almost always equivalent. I could join talk shows and tv shows and that. And then the money would just sort of appear. And vaporise again I have made up my mind to get a complete Cyberpunk library. It's going to take a while, and some money, but hey, Go Me!
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Haus Arafna suffices as far as Noise goes.
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This topic is seriously heading towards "them who is against us" and "them who is with us". Where "us" is the all time fabled US of A.
It feels as if we're just slagging each other off. We pretty much know what everyone is thinking by now, don't we?
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QUOTE Its cyberware (you need the upgrade in a Neural Interface to make it work, Basic book)
If it is not mechanically dependent (microbes, virus treatment, chemical treatment - all w/o nanites) it is bioware.
If it is mechanically dependent, it is cyberware.Doesn't that make pretty much everything cyberware as basically all things are dependent on mechanical stuff somewhere along the process?
What would be examples of bioware?
The Cyberpunk world
in Cyberpunk RPG General Chat
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This is one of the better explanations of the cyberpunk world that I've seen, bringing in a political aspect of the things, and a societal one...
I should make all my players read that---